A little bit of domestic drama, just to keep things fresh 😀
Rebecca is in general a very good mother to Ashling, and although it appears strained here, I wanted it to appear that their relationship was generally a good one.
I more or less left the original page intact, but divided the script over two pages like I had done before.
In the original, and in the new version I had 3 goals to achieve.
- Show Ashling’s frustration at her mother’s interference.
- Show that her mother’s interference was coming from a good place.
- That Ashling had a job working in her mother’s shop.
The last point is going to run into the next scene. Ashling’s mother runs a local grocery shop and she often finds herself being employed as a weekend / holiday shop-assistant.
More on that, next Friday.
Mums worry Ashling, it is The Way.
Now time for work, no rest for the wicked, don’t you know. 😛
Well…Ashling is only moderatly wicked…so she might get some rest eventually 😀