Page 2, and the re-draw continues! Scene-for-scene this is pretty much the same page as the original Chapter 4, however the original was disqualified for use due to poor draw quality and the fact that Ashling’s design didn’t stay consistent. Furthermore, I really screwed up the perspective in the digital alarm clock in the original, which I have fixed here.

In this page, we get a brief glimpse of Ashling’s dorm room (she’s across the hallway from Aoife’s dorm, which we saw at the end of Chapter 3), and in later pages we’ll see a lot more of where/how she lives.

Coming up next, Chapter 4’s Title Page following this 2 page ‘Cold Opening’ (as they call this in TV speak 😀 )