This page presented a bit of a ‘set-building’ problem, but also a scene-building opportunity.
When I first dreamt up this page, I imaged the girls going directly to a beach from the edge of the forest. Problem is, that scene I imaged couldn’t work thanks to the costal roadway running east of the School (first shown on Page 3 of this chapter).
Thus, I kept the roadway in place and added a culvert under it. I think this makes for a nice setup for the very next scene. I hope you like it 😀
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